Activity Essay

[yanksfan90217]

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Some undergrad applications require an activity essay which is 150 words tops. I wrote it on cross country and feel it is a very strong short essay. I know tons of kids wll be wrtiing this on sports and want to stand out. I revently went to Boys State and was thinking about writing on that. What do you suggest?

 

[bookgodess15]

No suggestions, but I'm struggling with the 150 word essay too. I got the long one down, but the 150 is killing me.

 

[Depakote]

Some undergrad applications require an activity essay which is 150 words tops. I wrote it on cross country and feel it is a very strong short essay. I know tons of kids wll be wrtiing this on sports and want to stand out. I revently went to Boys State and was thinking about writing on that. What do you suggest?

If you think it's your best activity and you've got a strong essay, go with it. Don't worry about what everyone else is doing.

It's OK to write about the same thing as everyone else as long as you do it in a way that sets you apart from them.

alternatively, what else would you write about?